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Re: Dragon Riders
Maradomin: He lied on the ground as he saw everything happen. The dark knights had left and the saviours were not long behind. Maradomin . Maradomin heard a voice in ...
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Re: Elmwood Street...descriptive writing.
When I read the subject I thought it was a joke (well not really) I was wrong........ That's a lot of description. Written in a good way, described in a ...
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Re: Short poem: Door to heaven
Continue for the escape read the previous "chapter" of this poem: As he huffed far away, From his bill, on the head man's hill, He stretched his limbs, and looked ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
Banned for using only one smiley :D :D :D :D :smt109 ********************************************************************************** LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029 :smt028
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Writing ABC's
B is for Bold letters
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon's Revenge
UUh a knight story. YAY.... Classic..... well the running away was not sooo classic, but anyways :smt038 On fourth grade you say... OK! My fourth grade stories.... SUCKED. I can ...
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Re: Short poem: The escape
Thaks :D
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Re: Broken Bones
Neat. Good poem yet again. I am not capable of anything else than to praise. applauds :smt038 ..........................................................................................................
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Re: Breaking Glasses
Ahh. So you started poems now :smt038 Great. Great work (as always.) Dramatic. Well written, all in all. Continue the greát work. *********************************************************************
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Melosica: Chapter 2 extended
:smt038 good work. A bit confusing with all the jumping :smt119 , from one place to an other. Well as said double narrator is hard. Try and simplify it a ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Riders
Maradomin: AS he ran towards the infirmary, the prince came running towards him. The prince looked amazed. "What are you doing here? Where is Ciru?" He asked Maradomin looked at ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Short poem: The escape
This is continue for head man's hill He shacked out of the guards grips. He ran around then waved goodbye, He ran, he ran and oh he ran some more, ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Rain!
RAIN. Who wouldn't like rain. You published it already? neat. :D Good for you! LORD ANZIUS WUZ HERE :smt029
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Riders
Maradomin When he got inside the palace he looked around himself. He ran down the corridor that took to the guests bed room. He slammed the door open, fearing the ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chapter 5
sure
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